Web Comics as an online format

Provenance

original web comic
The original web comic

Cleaning up

original web comic
A Stripped down version of the web-comic

My Attempted rework

  1. One coder enters a doorway encountering a colleague at the computer, illuminated only by the light of the screen.
    1. Hey, what are you doing here so late?
    2. It's friday evening.
    3. Nothing important, I'm
      just deploying a quick fix in production…
  2. The coder in the doorway close-up for single-character focus-sentence.
    1. Are you kidding me?!
    2. How many time do I have to tell you…
    3. We never deploy on a
      Friday and definitely not on a Friday Evening!
  3. Both coders in shot, talking.
    1. I know that. But it's 10 minutes past midnight.
    2. And as far as I know, there's
      no rule against deploying on a Saturday morning.
  4. Three frames. Top-Left: Coder in doorway, alert. Top-Right: Coder in doorway, considering. Bottom: Both coder in doorway and their colleague, who triumphantly holds a megaphone for an announcement.
    1. But…
    2. Hmm…
    3. Aaaand it's live!!

Second rework (departure from original)

  1. One coder enters a doorway encountering a colleague at the computer, illuminated only by the light of the screen.
    1. Hey, what are you doing here so late?
    2. It's friday evening.
    3. Nothing important, I'm
      just deploying a quick fix in production…
  2. The coder in the doorway close-up for single-character focus-sentence.
    1. Are you kidding me?!
    2. How many time do I have to tell you…
    3. We never deploy on a
      Friday and definitely not on a Friday Evening!
  3. Both coders in shot, talking.
    1. I know that. But it's 10 minutes past midnight.
    2. And as far as I know, there's no rule against deploying on a Saturday morning.
  4. Three frames. Top-Left: Coder in doorway, alert. Top-Right: Coder in doorway, considering. Bottom: Both coder in doorway and their colleague, who triumphantly holds a megaphone for an announcement.
    1. But…
    2. Hmm…
    3. Aaaand it's live!!